tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967549064493559707.post5675906701495219193..comments2023-10-24T16:53:10.709+01:00Comments on Stuart Perry's Displacement Activities: Televisual Autopsy - Part 2Stuart Perryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14077118568073419361noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967549064493559707.post-56829601499964125802008-12-10T21:01:00.000+00:002008-12-10T21:01:00.000+00:00Yes - it's only a personal list. I wouldn't dare t...Yes - it's only a personal list. I wouldn't dare to perscribe, but for me I thnk it's a waste of feedback really, to get someone to look at something where I might well change anyway it before I'm done. But I take your point.<BR/><BR/>I have now definitely decided that the 'fantasy sequence' version is not for me; but I'm quite sure with work it could have been good.Stuart Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14077118568073419361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6967549064493559707.post-53459527175584907852008-12-10T11:50:00.000+00:002008-12-10T11:50:00.000+00:00Re point 3 - personally I do find it useful to get...Re point 3 - personally I do find it useful to get feedback <I>during</I> writing as well as when I'm 'finished'. I just treat the 'in progress' feedback as a flag on the horizon rather than a traffic light right in front of me.<BR/><BR/>Perhaps you actually ended up with two stories here, with not enough time to give either of them justice? Personally I preferred your original idea but I can see how the 'fantasy sequence' version would have worked too.laurence timmshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04366127170754753612noreply@blogger.com